Thursday, September 08, 2005

Story - 55 words

Well, I was tagged by Anwin to write a story with 55 words. He has tagged Karthik too. I have finished. Here's mine..........

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Two guns

The gun reflected the sunlight. One bullet. My last.

I spin the chamber. White Pony puts the gun against his temple, calmly pulls. Spins chamber. I pick up the gun, put it against my head, pull the trigger. Blood splatters on the table, his. My other guns smoking. Could not take the pressure, you see.

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7 comments:

  1. hmmm...now I know why you are supposed to have a twisted mind...

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  2. Sounds like a scene from "The Deer Hunter"

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  3. Hmm... Updated mine as well...

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  4. waw..brutal huh...like one of those western movies with clinteast wood in lead.."this town aint big enuff for the two of us "
    ;-)))

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  5. True to your name!
    A game of Russian roulette? Macabre.

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  6. Yup true to my name for sure!!!! There is an online test that I took.....u gotta be scared of me people!!

    Fear is the Key!!

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